Tuesday 4 September 2018
Narrtive writting
One horrible dark night thanos and his powerful glove went for a hike. He was all alone in the jungle.then saw a cave and went in and had a sleep then he heard people screaming and getting chased.suddenly he froze and heard stomping coming towards him closer and closer and closer.By the time the monster got closer he ran so fast he couldn’t even breathe properly.the dark and creepy hole in the cave started to collapse and the monster got crashed and the monster was never to be seen but his big brother came to destroy the jungle but thanos stepped up and super punched him so strong that the monster went to space and died and thanos did a victory dance but some trees were still on fire.
One horrible dark night thanos and his powerful glove went for a hike. He was all alone in the jungle.then saw a cave and went in and had a sleep then he heard people screaming and getting chased.suddenly he froze and heard stomping coming towards him closer and closer and closer.By the time the monster got closer he ran so fast he couldn’t even breathe properly.the dark and creepy hole in the cave started to collapse and the monster got crashed and the monster was never to be seen but his big brother came to destroy the jungle but thanos stepped up and super punched him so strong that the monster went to space and died and thanos did a victory dance but some trees were still on fire.
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Kia ora Tupakari,
ReplyDeleteWow Thanos sounds like a very brave person hiking alone in the jungle. I am glad the monster went into space. Where did you get the idea for your story? Have you been in a cave before?
Tania
Hi Pakari it's reminis i lick your snapper because it is cool
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